exquisite enigma

This is a section of my story. The next section coming soon.... I charged up the aisle , the beast hot on my heels. I could feel his breathe on ...

Thanks! I already submitted a story (Fragile Existence) and I did read the rules, so I also critiqued two stories first. Thanks for the warm welcome! -Morgan

Fragile Existence is a novel I have been writing for some time, but have yet to finish. It's a little random, and a tad bit rough, but no matter it's ...

Wow, that had to be one of the best things I've read online in a while. Excuse me while I bow down to your amazing-ness (and yes I am full ...

I like it, but you should finish it, taking into consideration the others changes (in grammar). One thing I did notice, and that jabberhut did mention was this sentence: The ...

Hi, I'm Morgan, my nicknames vary but typically center around Morgie, Morganza, and Faye, (Faye because one of my more imaginative friends loved morgan le faye and would call be ...